PART 5


  EXT. CLEARING. DAY

  A bamboo spear, loaded with fish like a giant kebab, is carried across the clearing towards the cooking area wehre the chef and his helpers are at work.

  The spear is held by richard who smiles as he deposits the fish on the broad wooden chopping surface.

  RICHARD (V.O.)

  That's right, I had an aptitude, a hidden talent. All these years I'm good for nothing, turns out I'm a full-on old fashioned hunter fucking gatherer.

  INT. LONGHOUSE. DAY

  As Richard enters there are only a few people inside.

  He walks to the partitioned area and looks for a packet of cigarettes among his possessions.

  Opposite to him, Keaty is lying down, reading the Bible.

  KEATY

  Ah, the hunter gatherer returns. Satisfied with a good day's killing amongst the fruits of the sea?

  RICHARD

  That's me: a good day's killing.

  KEATY

  God has smiled on you.

  RICHARD

  He has?

  KEATY

  He has made you sharp of eye and swift of limb. In other words, you catch a lot of fish, you'll be very popular around here.

  RICHARD

  Great.

  KEATY

  Don't forget to thank Him, will you?

  RICHARD

  I'll try.

  KEATY

  He'd appreciate that. Anyway, first day's fishing, first day's catch, you lot are just about ready to join the community.

  RICHARD

  I thought we already had.

  KEATY

  Not yet baptized, my son, not yet baptized.

  EXT. CLEARING. NIGHT

  A blade burns in the fire.

  Keaty lifts the knife from the fire.

  The entire community is assembled, watching.

  He takes Etienne's wrist.

  RICHARD (V.O.)

  Every society must have its rituals. They're what binds you together, they tell you that you belong. Ours was simple. Last one to arrive tattoos the next.

  KEATY

  It hurts. OK?

  Etienne nods.

  Keaty swiftly cuts the simple symbol just below Etienne's shoulder and smears blue powder into the cut.

  Etienne winces.

  Keaty finishes and hands the knife to Etienne who heats the blade briefly in the fire before he turns to Francoise. He kisses her arm before he cuts.

  Francoise takes the knife.

  Richard offers his arm. She grips it tightly. She hesitates.

  He looks into her eyes.

  She cuts. He grimaces. She works on, holding his arm.

  INT. LONGHOUSE. NIGHT.

  A few candles still burn as people prepare to turn in for the night. Richard is lying in his sleeping area. He is watching Francoise.

  She is standing, visible only from the waist up above a partition. She is inspecting her tattoo.

  RICHARD (V.O.)

  All the excitement of arrival had given me something to think about, but it wasn't enough to displace my major preoccupation. You can go to the most beautiful place in the world, but the sunlight shall not bleach they passion, nor the tide wash away thy desire.

  A hand. Etienne's appears from below, beckoning her down.

  She takes the hand.

  Just for a moment her eyes meet Richard's and then she lowers herself towards the ground, disappearing from view.

  The last candle is extinguished.

  EXT. BEACH. DAY.

  A game of soccer is in progress, involving most of the population, men and woman.

  Etienne is playing well.

  A few people, not involved in the game, are scattered along the beach, relaxing. Amongst these are Francoise and Richard, who is watching the game.

  RICHARD

  He's good.

  FRANCOISE

  Who?

  RICHARD

  Etienne. He's good at soccer.

  FRANCOISE

  Oh, I wouldn't know.

  RICHARD

  You don't like soccer?

  FRANCOISE

  No. It's so boring.

  RICHARD

  Yea, but he is good. Look. Nearly scored.

  FRANCOISE

  Is that good or bad?

  RICHARD

  I think it's good. Not that I think there's anything good about being good at soccer. Anyone could do that. I could do it if I wanted to. I just don't want to. That's all.

  She sits up.

  FRANCOISE

  Richard.

  RICHARD

  Yes?

  FRANCOISE

  What are you talking about?

  RICHARD

  I don't know. Just conversation.

  FRANCOISE

  Do you have a girlfriend?

  RICHARD

  Here?

  FRANCOISE

  Anywhere

  RICHARD

  No. Why?

  FRANCOISE

  Just conversation.

  RICHARD

  I'm not jealous, if that's what you're thinking.

  FRANCOISE

  No, it's what you are thinking. You are far from home. You meet a girl. It's exciting, why not? You are attracted to her - it's in your eyes. Perhaps in hers as well. So you think something might happen; it's easy to believe, it's exciting. But she has a boyfriend so you are jealous. Don't worry. It's natural. Now I have seen enough football. Shall we swim?

  Richard is stunned.

  RICHARD

  So would I be wrong?

  FRANCOISE

  What?

  RICHARD

  If I thought something might happen - would I be wrong?

  She touches him.

  FRANCOISE

  Richard, how would I know? I don't know any more than you.

  She walks away.

  Richard watches her go. He turns to the football.

  Etienne scores.

  RICHARD (V.O.)

  And that's all it takes. Nothing more than a few words and the softest touch and your life is different, won't ever be the same again. Man dies, leaves you the mystery map to the secret island: happens every day. But you get a smile from someone you want: well that's special, that's worth the journey.

  INT. LONGHOUSE. NIGHT.

  Richard is sitting in his bed.

  He is watching Francoise in conversation with Keaty across the other side of the room. During Richards (V.O.) their conversation ends and Keaty walks away, leaving Francoise momentarily alone.

  Most of the population is present in the room. Sal is reading.

  RICHARD (V.O.)

  I would have liked to have continued our discussion, to thrash out the details of our forthcoming affair, but every time I had the chance to catch her alone, something always got in the way.

  Francoise is alone now. Richard is about to move across when the center of the room is occupied by commotion.

  At the heart of this are Bugs, and an Italian man, Gregorio. Bugs is holding a pair of pliers. Gregorio is in pain.

  Richard watches.

  BUGS

  I can deal with it!

  GREGORIO

  I don't want you to deal with it.

  BUGS

  It won't take a minute.

  GREGORIO

  No! Please, no! I must go to the mainland.

  Onlookers join in.

  VARIOUS

  No way/ You can't go to the mainland/ No, etc.

  GREGORIO

  Sal!

  Sal looks up for the first time.

  SAL

  Sorry, I wasn't really tuned in. You want to go to the mainland? To see a dentist, is that it?

  GREGORIO

  Yes.

  Sal is casual but firm.

  SAL

  No. It's out of the question.

  She returns to the book.

  With help from two or three other people, Bgs drags Gregorio to the floor and rips out the offending tooth with a pair of pliers. Gregorio screams.

  RICHARD (V.O.)

  I was sort of disturbed by this, but really only by the method, by the way that Bugs handled it. But the guy couldn't leave; I could see that. When you have something secret, everyone's got to take responsibility to keep it that way.

  Francoise has gone.

  EXT. BEACH. DAY

  A tropical lightening storm is in progress.

  At the edge of the beach, Christo, Richard, Sten, and Karl are standing under the ineffectual shelter of a palm tree, ecah holding their spear. A short distance away, under anotehr tree, sit Francoise and Etienne, hand in hand.

  They are all contemplating the sea and the sky. Christo has a swimming mask and a snorkel.

  RICHARD (V.O.)

  In any case, I was more concerned about the Francoise situation. After such a promising start, it just didn't seem to be reaching its natural conclusion. In truth it was beginning to annoy me; I mean what's the use of being in paradise if you can't have whatever you want. Correct me if I'm wrong, but isn't that the whole idea?

  CHRISTO

  The problem is seeing the fish. With the rain and the poor light, they are very difficult to catch. It could last for days. Sometimes when it rains, we get hungry.

  RICHARD

  Hey, Etienne, you going fishing?

  ETIENNE

  I don't know, maybe if -

  RICHARD

  Don't' worry. You just sit there. I'll go, OK? I'll go. You just sit there.

  He takes the mask and snorkel from Christo and marches down towards the sea.

  ETIENNE

  Good luck

  Richard looks back at them but says nothing. He pulls the mask on and resumes his march into the sea.

  EXT. LAGOON. DAY. AND UNDERWATER. DAY.

  Richard swims along near the sea-bed past rocks and coral but can see no fish.

  He surfaces and swims further out.

  He hears shouts from the shore. He turns and treads water.

  The shouts from his colleagues are indistinct, carried away by the wind and the rain.

  RICHARD

  (Shouting)

  I can't hear.

  He takes the mask off to clean the lens.

  RICHARD

  (Continuing)

  And you can't hear me.

  He puts the mask back on and turns away from the shore.

  He freezes.

  There is a shark's fin in the water, moving towards him.

  He looks around. The shore seems far away. He starts swimming frantically towards it.

  The shark closes in.

  Richard submerges and turns to face the shark.

  The shark approaches head on. It is about five feet long with the appropriate teeth.

  Richard is terrified, convinced he is about to die.

  The shark swoops towards him at speed.

  It stops, its teeth centimeters from his mask. It pauses then flicks its tail and swims past Richard.

  He is astonished.

  It circles him and approaches again, pausing just in front.

  Tentatively, Richard raises a hand.

  The shark does not react.

  Richard pats it gently on its snout.

  It swims around him again.

  Richard sees small fish swimming around him. He spears one and holds it out on the tip of his spear.

  The shark snatches it off and repeats its circle but does not threaten Richard.

  He smiles.

  As it approaches again, he holds the spear in both hands and lowers it by his side.

  The shark bobs in front of him, curious and friendly.

  Richard's arms begin their forward motion as his V.O. commences.

  RICHARD (V.O.)

  I ducked to one side, then to the other as it passed me. First on my left, then on my right.

  INT. LONGHOUSE. NIGHT.

  Grilled shark steaks have been passed around and eaten by all while Richard stands and relates his adventure. He cannot resist a glance at Francoise, who listens with rapt attention.

  RICHARD (V.O.)

  But it could see that I was getting tired, so I stood my ground as he swam in for his final attack.

 

© RON NYSWANER


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